A2 Media Coursework
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Monday, 20 December 2010
Sunday, 19 December 2010
Friday, 17 December 2010
The Reckless Coursework Trailer #2
Evaluation
- If I was to complete this task again I'd use more camera shots/movement to make my trailer look more technically pleasing and professional.
- I’d especially include more tracking/reverse tracking shots and ECU’s to help portray the characters emotions.
- In terms of lighting, I think my trailer is too dark and if I was to complete the task again I’d think about the exposure settings on the camera and which one I’d use.
- I think my trailer is reasonably easy to follow, however if I was to make it again I’d make my storylines even clearer and portray each characters identity a little bit more.- Maybe include a few more POV shots to create denser parallel narratives?
- I’d make sure that the actors spoke louder when they said their lines so that the soundtrack would not drown their voices.
- Because the dialogue was too quiet, I had to lower the volume of the soundtrack and increase the volume of the dialogue.
- The use of voice overs almost made my product cross over to the documentary mode of
genre. I think this worked however as it helped portray the storylines better to my target audience.
Monday, 13 December 2010
The Reckless: Coursework Trailer
Audience Feedback
-Good, strong narratives.
-Voice over needs to come in later.
-Girl needs to look through window after walking in.
-Clear genre.
-Actor looks at camera by mistake, not conventional of a soap.
-Strong branding.
-Setting clear and realistic.
-Storylines are realistic/believable.
Sunday, 12 December 2010
The Reckless: Voice Over
Beginning:
A brand new soap opera
which pushes all the limits...
After Montage:
Lies
Lust
Infidelity
Secrecy
Murder
Ending:
THE RECKLESS… Coming soon... on living!
A brand new soap opera
which pushes all the limits...
After Montage:
Lies
Lust
Infidelity
Secrecy
Murder
Ending:
THE RECKLESS… Coming soon... on living!
Monday, 15 November 2010
The Reckless: Script
INTRO:
Kyle and Susannah are sat in the dining room and are about to toast with a glass of wine. The voice over quickly follows on and then into the montage
Kyle: To us!
Susannah: To the future!
~VOICE OVER
~CUT TO MONTAGE
Voiceover: *Deception*
Scene 1:
Julia and Rupert are lying on the sofa watching television in their house. Julia looks happy, however Rupert is looking unsure.
Julia: I love you y’know
Rupert: (Rupert laughs awkwardly) Yeah… me too…
Scene 2:
Julia walks into hers and Rupert’s house as the front door is already open. She then walks into the living room to find Ellen and Rupert on the sofa canoodling. Julia in shock, Ellen and Rupert jump up in surprise.
Rupert: This isn’t what it looks like!
Julia: What did you trip and fall into her mouth?
Voice over: *Secrecy*
Scene 3:
Susannah is talking to Julia in the lounge of Julia’s house. After Susannah speaks, Julia drinks her cup of tea nervously.
Susannah: I’m not as nice as everyone thinks I am, you have no idea what I am capable of
Julia looking un-sure at Susannah
Scene 4:
Susannah and Kyle are in the hallway of Kyle’s house. Susannah is upset and Kyle comforts with a hug.
Susannah: I just don’t know what to do?!
Kyle hugs her to try and make her feel better.
Scene 5:
Susannah in tears as Kyle comforts her in the living room of Susannah’s house
Susannah: I don’t know what Julia thinks of me now…
Kyle: I’m sure it’s not as bad as you’re making out…
Susannah raises her eyebrow, which indicates how wrong Kyle is.
Voice over: *Lust*
Scene 6:
Ellie and Rupert are making out and then the scene cuts to Julia looking out of the window, she is extremely upset.
Julia’s voice over: “You have no idea what I’ve sacrificed for you!”
Voice over: *Anger*
Scene 7:
In the house of Ellen’s, Julia and Ellen are having a confrontation about the kiss and it gets out of hand and turns into a fight.
Ellen: Controlling bitch!
Ellen slaps Julia.
Julia: Slut!
Julia slaps Ellen. Ellen then pushes Julia onto the sofa.
Voice over: *Murder*
Scene 8:
Vanessa has entered Rupert’s house uninvited, sent by Julia. She starts to walk up the stairs and then the scene cuts to Rupert upstairs getting ready for his date with Ellen. This builds up suspense because something is about to happen.
Vanessa's voice over: This isn't over!
Kyle and Susannah are sat in the dining room and are about to toast with a glass of wine. The voice over quickly follows on and then into the montage
Kyle: To us!
Susannah: To the future!
~VOICE OVER
~CUT TO MONTAGE
Voiceover: *Deception*
Scene 1:
Julia and Rupert are lying on the sofa watching television in their house. Julia looks happy, however Rupert is looking unsure.
Julia: I love you y’know
Rupert: (Rupert laughs awkwardly) Yeah… me too…
Scene 2:
Julia walks into hers and Rupert’s house as the front door is already open. She then walks into the living room to find Ellen and Rupert on the sofa canoodling. Julia in shock, Ellen and Rupert jump up in surprise.
Rupert: This isn’t what it looks like!
Julia: What did you trip and fall into her mouth?
Voice over: *Secrecy*
Scene 3:
Susannah is talking to Julia in the lounge of Julia’s house. After Susannah speaks, Julia drinks her cup of tea nervously.
Susannah: I’m not as nice as everyone thinks I am, you have no idea what I am capable of
Julia looking un-sure at Susannah
Scene 4:
Susannah and Kyle are in the hallway of Kyle’s house. Susannah is upset and Kyle comforts with a hug.
Susannah: I just don’t know what to do?!
Kyle hugs her to try and make her feel better.
Scene 5:
Susannah in tears as Kyle comforts her in the living room of Susannah’s house
Susannah: I don’t know what Julia thinks of me now…
Kyle: I’m sure it’s not as bad as you’re making out…
Susannah raises her eyebrow, which indicates how wrong Kyle is.
Voice over: *Lust*
Scene 6:
Ellie and Rupert are making out and then the scene cuts to Julia looking out of the window, she is extremely upset.
Julia’s voice over: “You have no idea what I’ve sacrificed for you!”
Voice over: *Anger*
Scene 7:
In the house of Ellen’s, Julia and Ellen are having a confrontation about the kiss and it gets out of hand and turns into a fight.
Ellen: Controlling bitch!
Ellen slaps Julia.
Julia: Slut!
Julia slaps Ellen. Ellen then pushes Julia onto the sofa.
Voice over: *Murder*
Scene 8:
Vanessa has entered Rupert’s house uninvited, sent by Julia. She starts to walk up the stairs and then the scene cuts to Rupert upstairs getting ready for his date with Ellen. This builds up suspense because something is about to happen.
Vanessa's voice over: This isn't over!
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